So um I currently have the script and some sketches pf the first page of chapter 5 but don't expect it to be done until (hopefully) a week later- There are new characters coming up as well so I would need to finalise their refs after their concept is created around February... So yeah chapter 6 might take ages idk I would also like to redraw chapter 1-3 so that it can be read more easily offsite as well as the fact that the writing in chapter 2 is so inconsistent that IT REMINDS ME OF BTT- Chapter 1+2 will be merged in that version as well :D Ch 2+3 will be rewritten slightly so that the pacing is slower,and chapter 4 may have a extra panel on the offsite versions as well!(That panel will be posted on scratch as well but except it's just gonna get added into the chapter 4 project that I have right now instead of a complete redraw-)
Also here a short list of outlines if you will lol (It's practically a no spoiler list btw so dw) (Unless specified,all scenes after a establishment of a PoV will remain the same until another PoV is switched.) Ch 1: Intro-Tempest + Tide Ch 2: Intro-Starclan establishment [In the offsite version/redraw version I will merge the two chapters above] Ch 3: Filler Chapter Ch 4: Blood track pt 1 Ch 5: Blood track pt 2-Meeting ??? Ch 6: Starclan (By ???) PoV-Meeting ??? pt 1 Ch 7:Meeting ??? + ??? pt 2-Short Chapter Ch 8:Meeting ??? -Tempest + ??? rivalry Ch 9:Return of Tempest PoV Ch 10:Intro to leader system in DF Ch 11:Intro to ???... Ch 12:Starclan PoV-Meeting ???...