I’ll split this up into several sections. Section 1: Lack of transparency Section 2: Bugs Section 3: What I think can be improved Section 4: Thoughts on what features to add Section 5: What I like 1. Firstly, who are “the people who made the sfx and music” Secondly, what does lifetime PKR do? Third, what is PKR (ok I know it’s a currency but not everyone does) Am I missing some instructions I don’t see? I think it’s important to give details like this. In a game like cookie clicker, there aren’t instructions at all, which I’m fine with, because you can easily tell what everything is and stuff. I think it would be best to have a settings menu with abbrevations which would be off at default, so that you would know what pkr and lifetime pkr is. Also, once you click shop, it says the cost, but what do they do? I assume they give rupees every second, but how many? 2. I’m not sure if this is a bug because idk what liftime pkr does, but sometimes it just randomly goes to like 50 or something and sometimes goes to a decimal which obscures the writing of lifetime pkr. also, once you click the flag or hold, it stays in place until you let go. not sure if this is a bug for sure though. this might just be autoclicking detection, but I don’t see why if it’s a solo game. It just doesn’t register my clicks fast enough. 3. I think the artwork needs to be more polished. Also, in the shop, the text is a little crammed and the screen just feels to small in general. I suggest fitting the flag which you click closer to the left side of the screen, and also making the ray things that sometimes extend out of the flag (idk what they are) a bit smaller. Then the shop can be a little bigger. Also is there only three people? If there are I suggest adding more, probably by making the shop screen scrollable. For the facts button, I think you could put the did you know text not slanted and put it by the exit button so that the text could extend further. Hmm for maybe the last thing it doesn’t show how many of the people you’ve like, employed I guess. Overall I think it just needs a bit more polish in general. 4. I think that the game’s fine, just lacking some features that make it stand out from other clicker games. It feels more like a foundation for a clicker game rather than a clicker game. I can’t really suggest all the features I think would be nice but here’s one thing: Besides for the people I think there needs to be upgrades, like for example making people’s rupees per second more, or making you earn 2 clicks per click instead of 1. Basically I think that there needs to be an incentive for why someone would play the game, since the gameplay is a bit repetitive. 5. I’m sorry if I was a bit harsh, but here I’ll say the things I like. I like the facts button, it’s a nice way to learn more about the country and is fairly original. I also like how the shop has people from pakistan (assumedly) and lists who they were or are. I also like the background being a pakistan flag.
If you really want me to I could give more things that I think could be improved but I think I’ve listed the most major ones.
