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Old Comics #1 || Pokémon: Rotom's Prank

AXAxoLo-Fi•Created July 4, 2024
Old Comics #1 || Pokémon: Rotom's Prank
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Welcome to the Old Comics #1 ! These involves old comics I made long ago and looking back was.... Well... Um let me put this straight.. A complete abomination piece I've ever seen. [CLICK OR SPACE FOR NEXT PAGE] (OPTIONS) 1: Full Page = One page in full, will be hard to read & scenes confusion since orders are incorrect. - 17 costumes // pages 2: Close Up = All scenes in correct order. - 115 costumes // scenes --------------------- ! TODAYS COMIC ! Pokémon: Rotom's Prank ----- This is somewhere 2017-2018 - ISSUES - 1: Human designs - 100% horrendous, the eyes are disturbing and the proportion are definitely wrong. Characters appears to change outlines most scenes. 2: The Plot - Random things happening, there might be plot holes... Idk but boy I wonder why Jake totally erased his memory from a Mow Rotom & Garchomp able to inhale fire and breathing it out. 3: Charmander (originally Samantha's partner) - Charmander's body morphs constantly, His face being flatten and stretches. 4: Rotom (Including Transformation) (Not enough research: Its' Transformation doesn't look like the original) - Heat Rotom isn't even a heating oven, he just a draw with 2 handles (other hand, it just ate a very old chocolate). Later on it did became Heat Rotom, but the move should be Overheat, not "Fire Wing" (Sounds made up). - Frost Rotom looks close to the original at least., but the move should be Blizzard, not Ice Bead. - Fan Rotom doesn't even look like his original version, also its' move should be Air Slash, not Wind Attack. - Mow Rotom doesn't look close to be a lawn mower. It is somehow increases itself and proceed to consume Jake. - Wash Rotom looks close to his original, but it is still not the same. Its' move should be Hydro Pump, not Water Gun. - Why does its' pointy head bends down when sad °~° - Rotom's size kept going big. 5: Garchomp's design - Stretched out and shrinks. Usually cause it was difficult to draw Garchomp at my young age. 6: Pokémon moves - Not enough research: Rotom's moves in different forms in the comic are not part of his moves, Each form has one move only and all of those moves should be like in the game. 7: Short words, grammar mistakes and misspelling - Like the characters don't speak a lot... Most of their words are 2 or 3 (E.g. "Let's See" and "Ok") - Grammars are terrible.. Like "Kitchen Look" and "Nope Ghost Hah". NOTE: Piplup only one to look accurate. Except the eyes sorta. Sorry if it's blurry, some pages has sellotape on since some pages are ripped. I have to edit the photos more white and grey so it is easy to see, the original has more reddish like. ------ This is a series called 'Pokémon: Samantha's Journey', created by my best friend @FuryHyenaGamer and me. Originally was going to be a comic on scratch but it will be hard... So I will not be doing the comic... Unless future, idk tho...

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✎ Thumbnail/Coding/Art || @AxoLo-Fi ❄ Characters || @FuryHyenaGamer & @AxoLo-Fi - Samantha, Sally (FHG) - Jake (Mine) - Pokémon Appearance - Charmander (Originally Samantha's Partner) Garchomp (Samantha's Pokémon) Piplup (Sally's Partner) Rotom - (Pokémon Franchise belongs to the creator(s), Gamefreak & Nintendo) ✏ Software || FireAlpaca - Photos: Old Comic drawn Traditionally (2017-2018) ♬ Music || Mii Menu

Project Details

Project ID1044744723
CreatedJuly 4, 2024
Last ModifiedJanuary 29, 2025
SharedJuly 27, 2024
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