Soooooo I'm rewritting some future parts of toph agian!!!!!!! Couple of notes Getting rid of the stingpaw sideplot entirely. Sorry that kiddo is redundant Rewriting the Hornetstar plot line adding more character focused chapters to explore under utilized character dynamics minor dialogue changes One thing about how I write, is that nothing is set in stone until it is released in a chapter. Even if i have it fully sketched out I have seen myself resketch quite a bit. I like to sketch out quite a few chapters in advanced so I have time to let it sink in. and allow myself to decide if its good or bad and what needs changing. The only thing set in stone is the major plot beats. How they occur is up to change. I have made quite a few last minute changes. Like houndflights name. It was houndfang for the longest time until I was drawing the scene where he gets his name. The sketches even had houndfang written thats how last minute it was. But I reflected and wondered. Its this the name that fits him? Is this the name that cottonstar would give him? And the answer was no. So i changed it. I kill my darlings all the time. I killed Batmoon. I killed Houndfang. And now I'm killing Stingpaw. They didn't fit with my vision. Its okay to kill your darlings. You'll get a better story for it. ALSO I WANNA WRITE CHARACHTER FLUFF NOWWW! UHHHG. I have to finish this arc dangit whyd I make it so long????
