Incorrect Bio [explanation in these]: Wind [Your name can't be a reference to The Wind! You also need a last name!] // 5 [Sorry, but that's too young for this.. IT'S LITERALLY TWO FACTIONS ABOUT TO HAVE WAR!] // Gay [That's not a gender, silly! Put that in extra info!] // Blue eyes, black hair, yellow skin [This gives us no info, also DO YOU HAVE JAUNDICE? Your OC needs help??] // A blue shirt [does she go pantless? also need more detail] // She is kind and compassionate, yet a good leader and usually the one to stand out in a good way in an argument. [Where are the flaws?] // Can read minds [No powers. That's for The Wind, whose powers are unknown.] // None [There's a codeword. It's your oc's skin color (AND THERE'D BETTER NOT BE ANY DISCRIMINATION HERE!)] // Food // War // N/A // N/A // BFL [I thought you disliked war? Besides, you're TOO YOUNG, 5-year-old oc!] // N/A // The Wind's identity [NO. At least, not yet.] // N/A [You have no family?]
Corrected Bio: Anna Hearlswitz // 16 [Minimum OC age, you can be younger IRL because this WILL be kept kid-friendly] // Female // Her eyes are a light shade of blue, resembling the sky. When you make eye contact with her, her eyes seem to resemble an ocean landscape. Her long, wavy hair is a shade of black, but the tips are naturally white and she doesn't want them cut off. // She has a dark blue sweater that seems to be too big near the bottom, but fits like a glove at the top (I've worn shirts like that myself). It has a pink heart on it. She also wears a pair of blue jeans, but the area around the knees is ripped on the left leg. // She is very kind and understanding, and seems to know how someone feels by the look in their eyes. [Not mind reading!] She can be a great leader at times, but usually keeps to herself and has a short temper. She has a very loud voice for her size. // Is able to use any herb medicinally [Not a magical power!] // Would be a light beige [Would be? Valid IF you include the reason it is a would be in extra info.] // Chicken nuggets, mashed potatoes, peace, being called a nerd, oranges // War, bullying, discrimination of any sort, tomatoes // N/A // N/A // Neither [Makes sense, you don't like war! // She was orphaned at the age of 14 and was saved by The Wind, who brought her to safety. [As The Wind, I allow The Wind to be mentioned here. If I disapprove of this on your bio, you need to change it.] // How to make any medicine or cure [Future doctor?] // Has jaundice but is unaware of it [explains the "would be" from earlier!
