Here is the 8th chapter of First Love! I think this one has turned out better than the last few, and while I've been told that I put too much dialogue in the first chapter, it makes up a big chunk of most books, and these chapters end up being super short without them. They also let you get an insight into characters a bit more. Chapters 9 and 10 will have a lot of dialogue (chapter 10 especially), and I'll likely go back in and add (more) dialogue to previous chapters during the break between halves of the book. Click or right arrow/d to go to the next page, left arrow/a to go back a page, and space to show page number
Background music credits: Misery Business (Instrumental) by Paramore Also, I would appreciate feedback on this chapter, such as what you liked, such as more dialogue, or the love triangle/square/whatever it is! Chapter 9 coming May 28 First chapter: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/963357151/
