- The nose chin and mouth part (the one that sticks out) is a bit big so I shrunk it - the body seemed small so i sized it up - typically chests droop (downward unless shes wearing armor or smth thats shaped like that) - also make sure that the hair is flowing in the same direction. I didnt get to redline it but the bangs seem to flow to the left while the side hairs are flowing to the right. Make sure they’re both flowing in one consistent direction <3 The head i drew is still a bit big ;0; (was redlining over the screenshot so i couldn’t really do anything about it)
Rah Hopes this helps <33 ( you dont have to listen to any of this, jsut simple fixes here and there ) Also if you wanted her to be looking up you can just fix the head position (i drew it too downward but i was too lazy to fix)
